|
Post by fil de fil on Feb 25, 2006 22:15:07 GMT -5
ooc: As I read through this I noticed some power-playing. I'm too tired to point out where, but just be more careful about this as you go on. Power-playing deducts your chances of winning. *yawns*
|
|
|
Post by silentscream on Feb 25, 2006 22:34:15 GMT -5
Silent tried to step away from the vixens ivories, but it was to late. Pain shot through her underside. Blood spewed from her stomach. The vix started feeling dizzy, but put all her effort into fighting. She galloped about 10 strides away, leaving a trail of blood, then wheeled around and galloped straight at the vixen. Orbs blinded by hate, the mare dove for her enemies pillars. Pearls bared, not knowing where she was going to hit.
|
|
|
Post by fil de fil on Feb 26, 2006 9:34:55 GMT -5
ooc: I will say this: it was on the attack, not the defense, that I saw it, if that makes sense to you.
|
|
|
Post by breakaway on Feb 26, 2006 19:46:03 GMT -5
it makes sense...i'll do better :-D
The blood was bittersweet in her mouth. Bitter from the memories, but sweet from the vengeance for her family. Scream's ivorns dug into her pillar, causing crimson to pour from it. Rain let out a screech and stomped down hard with the afflicted pillar. Rearing up, she hoped to crash on the vixs head while she was low. Turning swiftly, she released a mighty buck, hoping to hit Scream's golden neck.
|
|
|
Post by fil de fil on Feb 26, 2006 19:56:38 GMT -5
ooc: actually, I scanned it to find where I found the pp earlier and it was Silent. And I found another by her. And that was just scanning it quickly. So Silent, be more careful. That hurt your chances of winning by a lot.
btw, Silent, if you want to know where I found it send me a pm and I'll tell you
|
|
|
Post by breakaway on Feb 26, 2006 20:02:37 GMT -5
ok i feel better now..not pping is hard
|
|
|
Post by silentscream on Mar 1, 2006 15:47:14 GMT -5
Silent grinned evilly at the scream of the vix. But the smile soon vanished. Her dial was shoved down into the dirt below her and pain was inflicted on her dial. The wind was knocked out of her. She gasped for air. Seconds later, a huge thump sounded off her neck. The vix had hit, and it hurt. Silent screamed in pain as she was thrown to her side. She slowly rose, for the pain was all over her body. She wanted to kill this vix, but didn't think she had any more strength to hold herself up another minute. But Silent would try. She would put all of her energy and try to bring the vix down, hurt her bad. Silent gathered all her strength, took a quick glance at Hidden and Lafeyette. Her kissers moved in the words of I'm Sorry... but no noise came out. Then turned to her enemy, ambition written all over her face. She snorted and galloped straight toward the vix. Her dial low, maw agape. She closed her eyes and awaited the impact. Hopefully it would come.
ooc: Sorry! Tis Hard! ugh...
|
|
|
Post by breakaway on Mar 1, 2006 16:29:46 GMT -5
Sympathy hit Rain with a sharp pang, it hurt almost as much as her injuries. Shoving it aside, she concentrated on the task at hand. Scream was dark, no matter how much she tried to deny it. She was tired now, trying to dodge Scream's attack. It didn't work. Rain was thrown on her back, landing hard. Rain grunted in pain as she scrambled to her feet. An entire area of flesh was ripped away where the vix's ivorns had caught her. Her ebon pelt was dyed crimson on that side. Rain stepped sideways, hind pillars seeking the vix's chest area. Whipping her bodice around quickly, she struck out with her ivorns, seeking the life vein.
|
|
|
Post by fil de fil on Mar 3, 2006 20:14:46 GMT -5
ooc: try it wrap it up soon, how about one more post each?
|
|
|
Post by breakaway on Mar 3, 2006 20:42:04 GMT -5
sounds good to me
|
|
|
Post by silentscream on Mar 4, 2006 12:12:00 GMT -5
ooc: okey dokes!
Silent stummbled to her knees. Slamming into the vixen had taken most energy out of her. She rose quickly, awaiting the vixens attack. But before she knew it, a blow was forced against her chest. She screamed in pain. Stepping backward her eyes focussed on the mare. She saw blood dripping down her side. Silent also saw the vixen going after her life vein. Fear had finally shown in her eyes now. She wheeled around and galloped away from the bite. Then turning around, she thought quickly. Should I run... or Stay? Then she awaited her enemies next move.
|
|
|
Post by nero on Mar 4, 2006 18:01:14 GMT -5
So much rage was building up inside Lafayette, and she decided to go home. She rose, and galloped off to her home. Waiting there for the victor...she knew who would return. Returning, the vix gave many bucks of rage. If the beast returned queen, Lafayette would fight. Not for her position, but for Scream's.
|
|
|
Post by fil de fil on Mar 5, 2006 9:55:43 GMT -5
Hidden glanced at Lafayette for just a moment, seeing her leave, then turned back to the fight. He coulnd't leave now, not at the very end. He couldn't miss one drop of blood...
ooc: sorry, my muse is on vacation in iowa
|
|
|
Post by kiki on Mar 5, 2006 10:04:43 GMT -5
lol. sorry, wrong account.
Lafayette glanced back, only once. She wondered somtimes if neutral stags were any light at all, now. The ess hoped Hidden did. Shaking her dial Lafayette continued on her way.
|
|
|
Post by breakaway on Mar 6, 2006 19:25:43 GMT -5
A snarl tore itself from Rain's lips as her opponent ran from her. Glaring into Scream's orbs, she saw the fear written there. Rain didn't falter from her mission, no mercy would be shown. Ivorns sought the life vein once more as 'er sharpened flints struck at the appendages below her. Pivoting swiftly, she released a short, powerful buck toward her enemy's head.
|
|